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Síofra ó Murchadha [FINISHED]
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Síofra ó Murchadha [FINISHED]
Shinigami
Síofra ó Murchadha
"Allow me to introduce myself."
Name: Síofra ó Murchadha
Apparent Age: A fit looking 70
Actual Age: 981
Gender: Male
Height & Weight: 5'6" 180 lbs
Eye & Hair Color: Pale green and dark grey.
Reiatsu Color: Dark green.
"I define who I am."
Appearance:
To avoid confusion, Síofra's appearance is being given within the framing device of a tongue-in-cheek noir style detective's monologue. So, without further ado;
Guy Noir wrote:It was a lonely Saturday near the end of autumn and I had just finished giving testimony in a case involving criminal geometry; the Greek mob got a bright idea on how to branch out from the usual addition and subtraction racket, and had spent a month drawing tidy little shapes around the city mayor. I was sitting down to enjoy an evening smoke, watching the black and white spirals of shadow and excess of the lung and cigarette trail lustily across the spotted whitewash of my office, when there was a knock on my door.
It was late, and I was tired, but I had been in this business long enough to know that when it's late on a Saturday and you're worn out from the last case you worked more often then not it's a beautiful dame who's on the other side of the door. So I said, "Come in." The door opened.
He was short, maybe five six, five seven. His hair ran down his back all the way to the waist, tied in a braid as thick as my wrist, dark grey; the same color as the barrel of the .38 I kept in the right drawer of my desk for emergencies. I prayed he wasn't one, but I had no way to be sure. His face was a closed book to me. One with tan leather binding and deep creases to be more precise, and I while couldn't quite make out the title, stylistically he was seventy years out of date. It would have been rude to stare at the scar splitting his left cheek right down the middle, so I did my best to focus on examining the rest of him.
Unfortunately for me, there wasn't much else to examine. He had a black robe on, one of those Shihakushōs you see in the pulps about the spirit warriors of Japan, only his didn't have sleeves. I almost went for the .38 in my desk when I saw the bastard sword tucked into the sash, but I took one more look up and down (Did I mention his straw sandals? I missed that I suppose, well anyway, he was wearing some. White socks too) that strange museum piece and decided that bullets might just bounce off.
There was a peculiar kind of age to the man, that tan skin wasn't hanging off him the way you see in some old timers. No, it was stretched taught over every bone in his face, on his arms too, outlining muscles I was ashamed to say looked slightly more exercised than my own, and I'm not much of a slouch. When I took a wealthy female client to see Julius Caeser several months later, well, that lean and hungry look Cassius is supposed to have? It reminded me of him.
He took a look at me too, with light green eyes I might have lingered over in a woman, said a few words I couldn't understand, and walked out of my office, just like that, with a straight back and a young man's gait.
I spent the next few hours puzzling over it all, but nothing made much sense. So, I just wrote it down in my files and marked it: CASE CLOSED
"And my actions define me."
Personality Traits:
Síofra is just as capable of feeling and expressing genuine sympathy, empathy, and compassion as any other soul, but his own history makes this difficult. Síofra experienced severe culture shock when he arrived in the Soul Society, despite remembering nothing of his former life. These two factors, combined with the lawlessness and dark fantasies of life outside the walls of the Seireitei, cultivated a feeling of unreality that has persisted ever since. Deep down, Síofra has doubts about the existence of anyone or anything beyond himself. This gives him a certain objectivity when it comes to analysis, but it also makes it more difficult for him to think of anyone, apart from close friends, in terms that are not either formal or technical.
In an effort to combat his feelings of unreality Síofra pledged himself to the laws and practices of the Seireitei as laid down by Central Forty-Six, a commitment he holds sacred. His pledge has taught him diligence and loyalty in both personal and formal activities, and it gives him certainty in action when confronting morally grey situations. But Síofra is not blind. Much of the Seireitei's law seems like opaque dogma, and he finds it troubling that general lawlessness is permitted in much of the Soul Society. Nevertheless, he performs his duties unflinchingly, though this provokes accusations of being just as dogmatic as those he serves.
These accusations and his rigid adherence to regulation only exacerbate Síofra's social difficulties. Having willfully isolated himself from others for the first two-hundred or so years of his life in the Soul Society, he lacks common social graces and is internally wary of anyone he has just met. Síofra is doing his best to change, and tries to be as friendly as possible, even if he doesn't feel particularly inclined to be. Age has taught him the value of good will.
Síofra has the benefit of nine-hundred and eighty-one years, though he only clearly recalls seven-hundred. His perspective is often of the larger canvas, or at least as much of it as he can see. Watching souls change over seven-hundred years has driven the point home that while forgiveness and compassion are labor intensive virtues, everyone deserves a chance.
"One more thing."
Additional information: N/A
"May Juryokuju have mercy on your soul."
Inner World: Wind rushes over a churning sea of black water stretching for as far as the eye can see, vanishing only as it nears the horizon into roiling clouds of white fog. A mountain island stands at the very center of the world, sheer cliffs of grey limestone rising out of the water, pockmarked with the entrances to smooth tunnels of varying height, all whistling as the wind sweeps by.
After rising for hundreds of feet above the pounding waves the cliffs transition into a more gentle slope of heaped rock and dark soil dotted with tufts of grass. The mountain rumbles near constantly as the cliffs below fracture under the assault of the waves, rock piles higher than most men shifting like sand dunes in a constant windstorm, some sliding off the mountain entirely, dissolving into the sea. Wisps of fog dart between them, flowing upwards towards the peak.
The same fog that shrouds the horizon hides the sun and higher slopes from view, but those who reach the top will find the gigantic Atlas Cedar Juryokyuju.
Zanpakuto Spirit: Juryokyuju stands rooted at the very peak of Síofra's inner world. His roots twist into and around tumbled masses of limestone, moving ever so slowly as the mountain rumbles beneath. Solid ridges and cracks in the bark creak as they bleed into and out of one another like ripples on the surface of a pond; concentric circles and interlocking patterns of knots slowly appear, only to vanish within an hour.
Branches as thick as a man's waist spread from a central trunk easily six feet in diameter, stretching upwards to its final point at ninety-seven feet. Deep green needles that catch the light with a metallic sheen cover the ends of each branch and twig, chiming softly in the wind as they brush against each other. Finally, six feet from the ground and framed by unmoving bulges in the deep brown bark, a rough oval gash three feet across and a foot high reaches all the way to the red heartwood. A sphere of amber sap like the pupil of a gigantic eye rests within the gash, streams of clear water trickling across the surface.
Juryokyuju speaks in whispers that have no visible source, and perhaps from some difficulty in speech he mostly keeps his sentences short and to the point, answering questions with more questions. He is normally serene, sometimes eerily so, and only speaks with emotion when powerfully moved. Because of this his moods and motivations remain largely a mystery.
Síofra has respect for the advice Juryokyujo offers, often in the form of a question, for while his questions are often frustrating they have never been cruel or without purpose. Though their first meeting was anything but friendly, Síofra has come to rely on Juryokyuju for support in his lowest moments.
Sealed Zanpakuto: A longsword, or "bastard" sword, with a hilt length and blade profile that fall neatly into the Oakeshott typology category XVIIIb (pictured third from the left). The blade is thirty-six inches long, the hilt ten, wrapped in plain black leather that terminates in a type T scent stopper pommel. The quillons are of style five, or "Bow tie". A wholly unremarkable sword.
Shikai: "Endure, Juryokyuju!" The blade and crossguard of the longsword shatter as the leather grip withers to dust under Síofra's fingers leaving nothing but four inches of the tang. The metal glows green, rippling as a thin steel branch erupts outwards from the forward end. In the space of two seconds the branch has completed its growth at forty-two inches, straight as an arrow, thick needles sprouting all along its length. The needles tilt, orienting themselves towards the end of the branch then flatten themselves into it, locking together as they overlap to form a slender rapier blade.
Three more branches sprout from the hilt, two spiraling opposite each other in a circular guard, the third twining around the tang in a wire grip. The fragments of the sealed state sword fly to Síofra's left hand, settling over it and resizing into a scale mail glove as a small pine cone grows from the back of the tang, completing the transformation.
Shikai Ability: Juryokyuju has the ability to propel any number of the needles that compose its blade forward as projectiles at roughly the speed of a bullet. These may then be used as seeds for further techniques.
"What's past is past."
Background:
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1039 AD
1039 AD
- Part One:
- Síofra was born into the year 1039 AD, on the straw floor of the village chapel, gazing upwards at the beams of the peaked thatch roof. His father, a red bearded giant of six feet (who stank of brine even after a bath) crushed the attending novice monk in an embrace, thanking him for hours of prayer for a successful birth and promising a half share of the next week's catch. Síofra's mother, pale and thin, brown hair damp with sweat, lay in the care of the midwife, listening to the monk and her husband crow over the child with words both holy and mundane. Saying nothing, she drew a leather cord from the pocket of her shawl and tugged a cross of glassy grey stone from her braid. Threading the cord through a smooth hole at the center of the cross she accepted Síofra from the midwife's arms with a whisper of gratitude. Placing the cross around his neck, her hands and head fell back, and at last she slept.
. . .
The winds from the sea off the north coast of Ireland were cold, but as Síofra grew they ceased to bother him. At five he was chasing his shadow sunwise around the cracked stone walls of the chapel of his birth, or tracing the pattern of serpents graven into the ring of standing stones that surrounded the village. In her stories his mother claimed that his father's ancestors had carved the patterns centuries ago when they beached their great wooden ships and came ashore to raise families. But even then, the stones had stood for years beyond count. When they converted to the faith they tore their ships apart to build the chapel roof, and many of the village huts as well had roof beams covered with the skeletons of long-dead barnacles.
At seven Síofra was skipping stones with the other boys near the ancient point of landing, nearer still to where the village men beached their own much smaller fishing boats. At thirteen Síofra began to disregard his mother's warnings of danger beyond the circle, wandering the grassy hills of tumbled limestone above the clustered huts. With a mind full of his father's tales of thanes he prowled imaginary castles, fought battles across the slick deck of a ship as it danced in a storm, or served as an armsman for whichever high king struck his fancy.
His absences did not go unnoticed.
1052 AD
- Interlude One:
"Síofra, listen to me." Caoimhe ó Murchadha sat facing Síofra across the low oak table that filled the hut's center room. He sat with his face pressed into the table. "I know you enjoy your games, but there is no reason to-"
"You didn't have to drag me along like that!" His voice had a sullen edge to it, and his face remained out of sight.
"Síofra, if I hadn't dragged you, you wouldn't have come home."
"The other boys will-"
"Oh, the other boys? The ones you called cowards for not leaving the circle to play with you? Their opinions matter now?" Síofra's mother reached for his hand, but he pulled it back.
"You're all scared!" Beneath the table his hands were twisting themselves into knots. "But God is on our side and if any-"
"Síofra, you know better than to invoke God over something so trivial!" His mother's scolding broke the locks that had kept tears in check, and sobs began to choke Síofra's whining.
"You told me stories about monsters in the hills and along the shore, but whenever I was afraid you said my cross would keep me safe. Were you lying? If...Why..."
There was silence for some time.
When Síofra finally lifted his head from the table he nearly fell from his chair. Despite the sunlight slanting through the window, Caoihme ó Murchadha's face was lined with shadows, wrinkles cutting deep grooves into her skin. White hairs he had somehow never seen before wound in patterns among the brown, and her eyelids sagged as if in sleep.
"The years I have spent watching you grow have been the happiest of my life. You battle monsters in your imagination because you can't see the real ones that drag the dead from their graves. You dream peacefully because you don't hear the banshee wailing in the night. You have no second sight." Her voice was strangely quiet. "A cross made from an Adder stone may be a powerful charm, but with the High Kings' warring there are too many dead. At such times... there can be no certainties."
"Don't live in fear, Síofra, but bear yourself with reverence, and caution, before that which cannot be seen."
1052 AD
- Part Two:
The winds were colder after that day, the fogs thicker, and Síofra lay awake on his straw mattress wondering just what it was that his mother heard screaming in the dark. He left the circle of stones once daily now, but it was only to help his father with the oars or the net on their moss covered rowboat. After two more years he went out alone, Urard ó Murchadha's bones ached too much to fish anymore and his giant frame was stooped with age. Another two years passed, and his mother's fears became less of a mystery. Síofra began to see lights under the water, pairs of red orbs circling in the wake of the other boats in the floatillia. When he dragged the rowboat up the beach each night he saw the crowds pressed against the outer edge of the standing stones, chains tangled around their feet and chests.
With every passing of the moon a choir of angels descended and the chained spirits vanished in a burst of white light. His mother's fears were unfounded after all, and the sea was a new world waiting to be explored.
1056 AD
- Interlude Two:
The village was only a smudge of orange light on the horizon beneath a back sky, and Síofra's nets were still in the water. The night had started cool and calm, but a hot breeze had blown in from the sea and the waves were beginning to stir.
Strange, there's no sun to heat the air.
He reached for his net-line and almost went headfirst over the side. Light was streaming upwards from beneath the boat. Far below, yellow lightning flickered, waves of blue and red fire broke over each other and faded into nothingness, circles of glowing orange shattered under unseen pressure. The deep boom of metal striking metal rose like the tolling of a bell with bubbles of unnatural fog that scalded Síofra's hands. He never looked away. How long the storm of lights went on Síofra couldn't say, but after some time the only one remained; an orb of blood red light, rising towards the surface.
Síofra scrambled for the oars, then thought better of it. I am protected, they may not even see me.
A strange weight began to settle of Síofra's shoulders and arms, he found he couldn't move. The air grew hot again, rasping like dry sand against his skin. He was bent almost double now, bones creaking, his chin brushing the handle of either oar as whatever power had him in its grip bore down.
Tak... Tak... Tak...
Dread wound around his throat.
Tak... Tak... Tick...
Red light etched his shadow over the waves ahead and a voice like an echo of the bells below spoke behind him.
"Your talisman makes it difficult, but I see you."
The boat creaked, then wrenched in a half circle. Head bent to his knees all Síofra could see were a pair of white cord sandals strung over feet as wide as the oar blades and black as jet. Standing on the surface of the sea as though it were solid ground.
"My... Lord...? Síofra whispered.
"The Fomorians are scattered, and I have no need for their titles. Lift your face so I may see you better." Despite the fear turning his muscles to water and the dread freezing them solid his neck bent slowly upwards. There was a white kilt wrapped around legs that on their own would have stood taller than his father. A massive stomach drooped over a belt of yellowed bone discs. The light burned somewhere above it all, but the strange weight blessedly kept his head from rising further.
Tick... Tak... Tak...
"You are of old blood, yes? You must be, to see me. But I think..." the giant's belly heaved and the air around him writhed in a heat haze. "...No, not some clan heir on a quest. Not some druid to be blessed. You are just a fisher-man." Síofra forced his head down, out of the penumbra of red light.
"Lord-Please..."
Tak... Tick... Tak...
"You had the courage to watch the Gods as they fought, now see the face of one." The command bent his neck upwards again, Síofra didn't have the strength to fight it anymore. First the feet and legs, then the grotesque stomach, and finally Síofra was staring into the heart of the red light, into the face of the giant. Fleshy cheeks bulged around a mouth of mismatched teeth. Some were sharp as needles and jutted past the lips, others were rounded nubs of enamel, barely visible, above them a pug nose with one nostril scarred shut snorted steam with every breath.
There were no eyes, nor was there a place for them. A circle, glowing the color of molten metal, rotated with mechanical slowness in the rounded forehead above the giant's nose. A stronger beam of crimson light shone through a hole near the outermost edge, growing brighter and brighter as it inched and clicked towards the lowest curve.
Tick... Tick... Tak...
His right hand held an eight foot sword of rusting iron, resting over his shoulders. His left held a joint of meat, pink skin and fingers still dangling from the end. Bone crunched as the giant took a bite.
Tak... Tak... Tick...
"My foe is bound below, so I may enjoy the meal. And now that you are here..."
Tick... Tak... Tak...
Brighter and brighter.
"And now that you are here and have seen my face, you may give a message to the black robes for me." He hefted the sword, lowering it to his side.
T-Chak
A flood of red light ate the world around Síofra alive.
"Tell them Balor is still free." There was suddenly pain in Síofra's left cheek, and the weight of the stone cross vanished from around his neck. Something struck the bottom of the boat with a hollow thump. Síofra felt himself sinking into the water as his vision returned, chain spooling upwards from his chest as he fell.
I'm dead...
1309 AD
- Part Three:
The man who woke in the back room of a paper house in the 48th district of the Soul Society bore little resemblance to Síofra. His hands, when he lifted them to push a molding blanket aside, were wrinkled and the bangs that brushed over his eyes were grey as if from age. When he tried to frown his face felt... crooked. The man traced the line of a scar from the center of his cheek all the way down his neck to the clavicle. The room around him had no visible door, only paper walls supported by strips of dark wood, the floor was covered with what might have been woven rushes. As he tried to rise a section of wall slid sideways on a greased track, strangers crowding into the room, kneeling in the dust. After several hours of question and answer the man who had been Síofra began to wish he had never woken up.
His body, the house, the language the other tenants spoke that he inexplicably understood, it was all wrong. He didn't know why. All he could describe of his past were dreams of sprinting underwater or wandering a mountain wrapped in clouds. When asked for a name he had none to offer.
His apparent housemates could only say that he had been asleep in a storeroom at the back of their house for as long as any of them could remember, over two-hundred years. They called him Sleeper. After lying in the dusty room at the back of the paper house for several more hours listening to strangers telling stories of Shinigami and Hollows, Sleeper finally stood, and without a word slid or battered his way through any walls standing in his way until he was finally standing in the middle of a dusty street, the sun blazing overhead. He looked from left to right. There was little difference between the two. He choose left, walking on and on, pretending not to hear the yelling of his now former house-mates.
In the next three days of walking he saw men with swords sprouting from their heads and hands cut at each other until their blades shattered and dissolved into motes of light that flew into open eyes and mouths. He passed bizarre castles of lacquered wood and stone whose gates spoke and spat out people who had never entered. He watched swarms of black butterflies descend on crowds and vanish with them in bursts of white light.
How could any of it be real?
. . .
A little over two centuries passed, and Sleeper came to understand the order of the world. The black robes, calling themselves Shinigami, enforced law. What little there was. Beasts called Hollows occasionally raided the poorer neighborhoods of the Soul Society, but Sleeper had learned to run fast and far when he heard the first empty wail.
None of it seemed real, but why take chances?
Hunger kept him awake and night, a burning sensation just above his navel. Most of the other souls didn't seem to feel it, but why would they? Street vendors sold pieces of rock candy, bamboo tubes of water, or ovals of white grains wrapped in black leaves. Nothing filling. So Sleeper ate the leaves off trees, wincing at the bitter taste. He drank gallons of water from public hot-springs, ignoring the stares. He worked small jobs wherever he could find them, moving from district to district, to buy as much of the white grain as he could. Life, or death, became a steady repetition as he struggled to fill his belly.
It took another fifty years to realize that the Shinigami were paid, and that they must have at least a few meals free. Manifesting a sphere of his reiryoku was difficult, but not impossible, and after several months of failed attempts he presented himself at the entrance exam in a spotless white tunic and pants, a thick braid of grey hair dangling down his back to the waist. A few hours later he was one of them.
. . .
The Soul Academy stood nearest the north gate of the Seireitei bordered on one side by the fortress wall that hung perpetually in midair. This made training excursions to forest parks and mountains easier, and most important of all, it kept the students beyond the massive crush of reiatsu generated by the Gotei Six squad barracks at the heart of the Seireitei. Learning to read and write wasn't hard for Sleeper, he had nothing but time between meals and practical classes. The other academy students were surprisingly friendly, but he had seen all their faces multiplied thousands of times on the streets outside the Seireitei, on hundreds of different bodies. The matching uniforms only made them look all the more like dolls stitched together from pieces of other dolls.
Their smiles made Sleeper queasy, and he found excuses to avoid each and every one of them.
Constant skill exams kept him from overstaying his welcome in the meal hall, though his hunger had strangely begun to subside, but while he passed it was never by much. The composition of advanced form Hollows, the present geography and technology of the living world, the ethical duties of a Shinigami; none of it held Sleeper's interest. Zanjutsu, Hakuda, Hohou, and Kidou were far more entertaining, but his strikes and spells never seemed to reach their target.
After ten years of hanging around in the third lowest grade bracket making no progress towards graduation, Sleeper received a letter informing him that if no extraordinary progress was made within the next month his Zampakuto would be "forcibly confiscated" and he would be returned to the civilian districts of the Soul Society.
1544 AD
- Interlude Three:
- He was lying on a ledge of grey rock, water crashing against a shore somewhere in the unseen distance.
Have I...? Sleeper looked down. Hundreds of feet down, waves were beating a steady tattoo against the cliff beneath the ledge. The sliver of ground shook as the cliff began to split. Another Dream, then.
His imagination had tormented him that first night, after the letter. Asleep, he had found himself back on the empty sand streets of the forty-eighth district. He moved to take a step, and sank into the road up to his ankles, then his knees, then his waist. A beam of sunlight caught Sleeper's head as he lifted it to cry for help, intensifying as the world around it darkened. The light burned away the skin on his face and bore through the bones of his forehead, filling his skull with fire. He could still feel the sand as it crept up his chest, and Sleeper woke when he felt it close over his head.
I don't need a Zampakuto, and I don't want to be a Shinigami... let them take it. What do I care?
Dreams be damned, this one was only boring anyway. Still... He eyed the cliff face above the ledge-but that was insanity. He would only tear his hands to pieces and fall into...whatever. The rock face below the ledge was starting to fracture, but it would probably hold together. Much better just to wait.
No. You will die.
...what?
Make no mistake, that piece of the world is coming apart. Whatever you feel about reality, falling here will be your death.
"...who are you?"
Someone who has waited over a century for you to reach this place on your own. In vain. I can no longer wait. Either decide to climb and live, or stay as you are and die.
The ledge shook, the edge crumbling as a particularly vicious onslaught of waves struck the cliff below. Sleeper took an involuntary step back, whirling in search of the voice's source. There was none. The wind was rising, tugging at his clothes, washing over him with the sounds of the dark sea. The dream had gone from mildly boring to inexplicably terrifying. Anger gave him back his voice.
"Is this a joke? I'm an old man!"
Liar.
"I've hurt no one!"
Is that what you think?
"This isn't real!"
Then die.
The stone beneath his feet collapsed with a roar and Sleeper shrieked, leaping to the rock wall and scrambling for purchase.
You are decided, then.
Sleeper closed his eyes against the driving wind and the sight of the drop, his anger was still there, but fear had stolen its strength. "I don't know what you think you are, or why you think you can do this to me. This isn't my inner world, and my Zampakuto is an Asauchi, a worthless sword who doesn't have a voice! I didn't jump because I was afraid, I jumped so I could have the chance to find you, whatever you are."
Impossible when you do not have the strength to climb.
"Just wait."
As you wish.
The world around him vanished, and he found himself in his own bunk, the first bell ringing.
1544 AD
- Part Four:
- Sleeper forgot all about the letter or the chance of losing his Zampakuto. Nevertheless, he threw himself into his studies with new vigor. Unreality didn't seem to matter quite as much anymore. His waking training had the desired effect of increasing strength in the dreams, in the first week he had climbed the cliff. In the second he was well up the slope of shifting stones.
When he worked past his fear he realized the mountain was beautiful, in a stark, strange way. He wouldn't have minded if it had been his inner world. Whatever power urged him to climb wasn't as cruel as he had first thought, it pointed him to shortcuts that, while more difficult, aided the ascent. It wasn't unenjoyable. Nearing the peak, Sleeper finally admitted he had been wrong.
He gave Juryokyuju his name when he at last laid eyes on him, and Juryokyuju had one final surprise for him. He had no way to help Sleeper remember everything he had lost in his past life, but he gave him what he could. When Sleeper graduated from the Soul Academy with shikai in hand, it was with his own name, Síofra ó Murchadha.
1547 AD and Onward...
Desired Position: I can't say I wouldn't enjoy being a Captain or Lieutenant, but that's a lot to ask. The only rank I have strong feelings against would be raw recruit.Several writing samples have been given within the background.
Last edited by Síofra ó Murchadha on Wed Oct 26, 2011 6:04 pm; edited 27 times in total (Reason for editing : Writing is still ongoing.)
Síofra ó Murchadha- Strength : 30
Posts : 22
Join date : 2011-10-09
Location : Wherever I go, there I am.
A Few Words on this Application:
There are a few things in Síofra's backstory, particularly in his wanderings of the Soul Society that, while they don't blatantly contradict any point of BLEACH's metaphysics or organizing principles, are not seen in canon or cannot be tied obviously to any one concept. If these are problematic I can do my best to remove them.
I also hope that Juryokyuju's sealed state can be permitted. My rationale for its unique shape is that Síofra is a westerner, and while the longsword and katana differ greatly both have become ubiquitous as the weapon of the higher class warrior, be it knight or samurai.
I definitely rushed the last part of the background, but it's probably for the best, and the application is finally finished!
I also hope that Juryokyuju's sealed state can be permitted. My rationale for its unique shape is that Síofra is a westerner, and while the longsword and katana differ greatly both have become ubiquitous as the weapon of the higher class warrior, be it knight or samurai.
I definitely rushed the last part of the background, but it's probably for the best, and the application is finally finished!
Síofra ó Murchadha- Strength : 30
Posts : 22
Join date : 2011-10-09
Location : Wherever I go, there I am.
Re: Síofra ó Murchadha [FINISHED]
Okay I noted the sealed zan and I'll make an exception on it. As far your app in general...
I will award you with 400 EP which is the rank of Lieutenant. Honestly your app to me is Captain level however I'm hesitant about rewarding such a position to someone who isn't quite active. So with this if you prove that you can be active then I have no qualms with allowing you to progress to Captain rank. That said pick the squad you want to be a member of. <<
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I will award you with 400 EP which is the rank of Lieutenant. Honestly your app to me is Captain level however I'm hesitant about rewarding such a position to someone who isn't quite active. So with this if you prove that you can be active then I have no qualms with allowing you to progress to Captain rank. That said pick the squad you want to be a member of. <<
Izumi Tenshi- Human
- Strength : 30
Posts : 121
Join date : 2011-10-01
Outstanding
Thank you, I can certainly understand not making a completely new member a captain, even Lieutenant was more than I thought I could hope for. I definitely plan on being more active now that my application is finally done.
So far as I have seen the Second Squad Lieutenant's spot is open and seems like a good fit for Síofra. I'll copy and paste the application into Character Bios and work on his stat configuration and techniques.
So far as I have seen the Second Squad Lieutenant's spot is open and seems like a good fit for Síofra. I'll copy and paste the application into Character Bios and work on his stat configuration and techniques.
Síofra ó Murchadha- Strength : 30
Posts : 22
Join date : 2011-10-09
Location : Wherever I go, there I am.
Errr...
...Or you can copy and paste it? Sorry, I don't have the clearence to post in that area of the forum yet o_o;;
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Re: Síofra ó Murchadha [FINISHED]
<_< No I'll move this thread now to the Bio section. Then I'll assign your color.
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